Clause and Effect

Makari | Syntax of the Self – Part 1

Between one thought and another
a comma breathes—
a pause that keeps sense from collapsing.

Some people live in periods,
others in semicolons—
trying to connect what should stay distinct.

And every but we speak
undoes a little certainty.
Every and
adds weight to what we carry.

I used to think logic lived in rules;
now I see syntax
as an ethics of relationship.
Where you place the pause
is how you value
the next thing you’ll say.

Yet even careful grammar can deceive—
precision isn’t always truth,
sometimes it’s armor polished to shine.

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Post Note
On precision, restraint, and the pause that keeps meaning alive

The comma is a moral instrument. It teaches proportion—the art of stopping just enough. I didn’t always trust pauses. They felt like weakness—an admission of doubt. But the comma taught me patience: meaning gathers strength in the spaces we refuse to rush. To punctuate well is to measure the distance between truth and noise, between the impulse to finish and the wisdom to wait. Each mark is a boundary of care: how far we let thought run before we guide it home.

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